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Finally I finish this drawing.

I read the book at the moment and I love it! :heart: I look forward to have the possibility to see the movie!


A4 Boesner paper
mechanical pencils
Polychromos color pencils

WIP 1 [link]
WIP 2 [link]
WIP 3 [link]



My other Twilight drawings:

Edward Cullen
When the lion loves the lamb

Critiques


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First, I must say that this is an original way to present a portrait. Looking at a portrait from a non-standard angle always gives some interesting and special character.
Another thing I like about this work is the use of a glimpse of colour in an almost black and white drawing.
Also, most of the face looks realistic and does represent Kirsten Stewart as Bella in a "right" way. I especially like the eyes and the lips which in my opinion are well-drawn from a technical point of view.

About things I think could have been worked on a little more - I would like to suggest the right side of the drawing: The hair looks a little too "simple" comparing to the face. More light and darkness contrast could have given it a more realistic look. Also, the "Twilight" text looks a little out of place. Its appearance by itself does add to the originality of the work, but something in the way it's drawn seems less fit to me - maybe making it more saturated could have helped.
Another small point - the chin line. It looks a little blurred and crooked in the lower part. defining it better would have given it a more realistic look.

Overall, I do think it's a good drawing.
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:iconjurgendoe:
Muss meinen Kopf soweit zu Seite neigen das ich fast nen steifen Hals vom Anschauen bekommen habe ... mennooooo konntest das Bild ne richtig aussstellen =p

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:iconwitchi1976:
Nö, dann hättest Dich beschwert das man den Kopf so verdrehen muß damit man die Schrift lesen kann. :nana:

Mal davon gibts ein add-on für firefox damit man das Bild drehen kann. ;)

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:iconvitani88:
sieht super aus!

Ich bin auch grad dabei das Buch zu lesen und finde es toll :) Freue mich daher auch total auf den Film ;)

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Great job, Marion! Beautiful work!

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:iconwitchi1976:
Ja ich les das auch grad und es ist echt schwer das wieder zur Seite zu legen. Die nächsten Bücher werd ich bestimmt auch lesen.

Ich hoffe ich komm ins Kino.

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:iconstreichelweich:
WOW :wow: sieht das klasse aus .... wieder einmal ein megageiles Superbild von dir :hug:

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Absolutely beautiful. :heart:
:iconwitchi1976:
Thank you so much Josh!
Hope you had a good start to the new year!

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:iconvitani88:
ich weiss was du meinst :D Habe das Buch vor ca 4 Tagen angefangen und habe schon mehr als die Hälfte gelesen ^^

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Danke Dir Süße, freu mich immer wenn Dir meine Bilder gefallen!

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