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Curly Phoebe

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Phoebe my oldest daughter. The second time I draw her with water color, but this time I use water color pencils, last time I only use brushes.

First water color of Phoebe you find here

Koh-I-Noor water color pencils
white gouache
black liner
brush and water
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I Really enjoy the colors you used for this piece. I like the extra dark colors in the eyes It attracts attention right to them, but I dont know if it is the way the face is angled or if its jus the lighting but the proportioning on her face seems to be a little off. I also think it might look better if you put more darks in her hair and more contrast and darks in the roses on her dress. I think it will give it a more finished feel. I dont really like the empty corner because it draws attention away from her face and is more of a distraction then anything. The background does need more dettail. I really do want to see a texture on the roses.